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Remember when

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Remember when she used to smile?
or how she used sing?
or how she laughed so heartily when she could make a joke out of almost anything?
remember when she had that sparkle in her eye?
remember when it was rare to see her cry?
remember when she had a life? Do you remember?
she has worn away, become withered with each passing day she no longer shines bright, no, instead she gives in to the night.
dark as the clothes she now wears, her pillow awaits the inevitable stream of tears.
why? she asks, cause she does not know, why does this pain continue to grow. I've watched her fade before my very eyes, I've seen the way she doesn't even try because her pain is to much to bear and the emotion she once had is no longer there. I remember her and how she used to be, I remember well because she is me.
I'm hurting
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snoogaloo's avatar
wow!!!! got me teary eyed at the end when you realize that she sees her own sadness but can do nothing about it all while remembering happy times. i have so been there. really well written!!! totally conveys how i feel some days as i so remember all my smiles and yet i wonder some days where those smiles disappered to. you convey that feeling so well in this piece!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: